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[yavart]

Hi all im new here from Tehran Iran, im trying to do some PS works for my single music tracks and i will be thankful to get any advise or critique from you as i know they will be very helful for my music to be heard and seen through the internet. these are 2 of my works for my recent tracks, what do you think ? BTW forgive my english in advance i might not be so good at it

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[siavash]

Chetori?

The only thing I can add is that there is a lot of negative (empty) space on the first image. If I were you, I'd add something in place of the black background or brighten up the face.

[yavart]

Siavash mamnonam azat .

i made some changes on both pics , and the first pic you mentioned i moved the face to right a little and changed the song name font style, . im going to attach them in here but couldnt find the attach bottom ,

[yavart]

Aha, please tell me which 1 is better

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[siavash]

The second versions are much better. The first cover is now better balanced in terms of colors.
The second cover is also less involved, which is good. The flowers on the first version didn't match the color scheme of the whole image.